Monday, August 31, 2009

unfinished thought

it's not that his smiles are any less charming
just because he uses them to punctuate
the joyful buckings of a healthy little body
at three o'clock
on monday morning

4 comments:

~im just only me~ said...

title...?... aren't most poems unfinished thoughts? lol :)

don't be emily said...

well, it was an unfinished thought. And I don't know what else to call it lol.

Mairi said...

I followed you here from vazambam. A worthwhile trip.
"Lingis' is the code for this comment. Perhaps as in Alphonso Lingis, an American philosopher "who holds that the world is made up of numerous self-contained and mutually external levels, to which humans must adjust their perceptions and ideas." No doubt one of those levels is populated by mothers and babies enjoying - or not enjoying - their own late night world.

Hugger Mugger said...

Wow, thanks Mairi???????