Saturday, March 1, 2008

High on a graveyard hill
Shadow and sunset,
Peace of the sleeping will,
Peace comes at last.
Rain breathes a half-heard sigh,
Waits, doesn't fall yet.
Resting, the dead ones lie.

Life comes too fast.


~im just only me~ said...

I really like this the say it is, but since im supposed to comment ehem... i think you should make it into a haiku... or make a haiku like it.. or something lol.. it just has haiku that a word? *sounds better than potential...*
p.s. Glogoud!...

~im just only me~ said...


don't be emily said...

It could be. But it seriously took me hours to pare it down to the words it is. I don't know if I'd want to try to make it shorter still. Ridding myself of unnecessary words is still a battle for me.