My heart is broken, and it will not heal
Last night, until I fell asleep, I cried
I cannot put a name to what I feel
Much too confused for phrases cut and dried
My dream...so overused...came true last night
But as I reached with wonder in my hands
To touch it, it was rudely....so cliche...
And boldly snatched away, and now I stand....
Oh, please don't laugh. Before you call this trite--
You were the dream that broke my heart last night.
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oh sweet sweet... didnt see the end coming... very nice...
dude, i love it. beautiful really.
Okay Cassieandra, so I'm replacing the comment I removed... :)
ya know...as I read the last line, I had to stop and read the first again as I thought "wait, didn't she already say that in the first line??" but point of fact you didn't.... Guess I "knew" through some poetic knowledge of what you were speaking of as I knew the same feeling just the last weekend....
Most awesome lines. I very much liked it. Hope you'll post again soon.... :-)
~Bec
lol. I just realized you used the same format as I did on my page! Lol. Black with green title grey lettering... :) Nice, very nice.
Great minds....=)
fools...
You know you're just jealous...
--oh, and have you ever clicked on the little wheel chair for the hearing impaired by the word verification line??? I did just for the heck of it and WOW! I don't know what the heck that was supposed to be saying!!!
love it... can't explain why... perhaps because it comes from an innocent past...
I really love pixie dust ^.^
hmmm, having read this over once again, I find that I connect in some weird way most recently. You see, I had a dream that broke my heart too... a daydream, a passing thought, most unexpectedly come to life, and then quickly and unwantedly snatched away... *le sigh*... i guess i just woke up.
Liked it. Enjoyed the rhyming scheme too.
Pretty successful attempt to avoid being cliche despite the common subject.
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