Thursday, June 25, 2009

Awakening

I stand before the closed venetian blinds
With summer morning sun a golden silent promise
Waiting, glowing and awake.
And blurred across my early morning mind
A hesitation, like the moment of a first kiss--
Most important choice I'll make.

5 comments:

~im just only me~ said...

what is the point of "venetian"... seems almost redundant don't you think?

don't be emily said...

There's other kinds of blinds.....anyone else think it's redundant? I didn't think twice about it....

Anonymous said...

lol. I didn't think twice either. ...I mean, it could have been Roman blinds so...yeah, thought it was fine :)

~Bec

Mother of Perseus said...

yeah, Cass, coulda been any type of blind...

don't be emily said...

Appeal to the multitude--meaning others who have read this and not said anything for whatever reason: is "venetian" redundant?